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Post by perris on Jul 30, 2009 9:46:36 GMT -5
Name: Perris Thomas Nickname: Perry, Perri Age: 16 Ethnicity: African American Height: 6'1" Weight:160 Gender: Male Alignment: Undecided Birth Date: March 4 Birth Place: North America
Relatives: 2
Name: Reminance Thomas Age: 14 Ethnicity: African American Height: 5'6" Weight: 130 Gender: Female Birth Place: North America
Name: Regal Thomas Age: 60 Ethnicity: African American Height: 5'9" Weight: 154 Gender: Male Birth Place: Japan
Personality: Perris is very easy going. He's the person that sees all, knows all, but doesn't tell. He knows how to laugh. Easy to talk to with problems, "The Guru". Doesn't see himself clearly a lot of the time. Can be a close to any friend since he understands a lot of people and were they come from. Sometimes he is slightly annoying and immature, he is the loveable person that gets on your nerves.
Perris is at most times seems happy, but reality he is in deep thought thinking of whats going on around him. Also most people would put him as a happy person, but he is more depressed than most people would think. Music and archery are his only outlet. Archery gets out his frustration and helps him concertate. Music is an outlet to him listening to the words to calm himself and to let out his talent show....
Appearance:
Perris will usually be found wearing dark blue, relax fit jeans, Vans shoes, and a tight black tee. He also can be found wearing a black jacket with a gray outline. On his jeans is a chain that goes to his knees. He wears a pendant giving to him by his late mother around his neck and never removes it. He has silver hair and eyes to match. His hair is in a spiked fashion. His skin is the same color as caramal.
History:
He was born on a cloudy night somewhere in the north. He was surronded by his loving family and his brothers friends. He found himself soon attached to the nature around his house. As soon as he was able to run he ran into the forest at night and found a small field in the middle of the forest. This soon became his hangout until a bunch of preppy kids found it and started to party there leaving beer bottles and garbage everywhere. He then got blamed for it and made him decided to move to Japan.
His home being in the north he became very use to the cold. He began getting in the habit of wearing the same jacket were ever he went. Soon the Jocks took an intrest in him do to his build. They wanted him to be a running back but he turned them down. The Jocks then started to do what ever they could to hummilate him. He soon decdied that he would get pay back. He soon started to vandlize the Jocks house. Long story short, he got caught....another reason to move.
The one thing that changed his life was his group of friends. HIs friends were differnt then most people. There seemed to be one from every crowd of people. Goth, Prepish, Emo, Gossiper, Jockish, Scence, Skater, and a nerd. They were the only ones in the whole school that seemed to hang out with people. It seemed like they all were connected in one way. There friendship with Perris. Also in this group of friends he and one that he had fell for. He never told her, all he did was let it pass over with out a second thought. Then he supposed friend went out with her and broke her heart by trying to get with other girls right in front of her. After that the friend joined the Jocks and helped them hummilate Perris. He was the one that caught Perris.....
Soon after that happen a huge fire was started in his house setting it ablaze. He and his sister escaped with their lifes, but there father and mother hadn't. Soon child servics came to pick them up. Almost as soon as they were put into a foster home, their only living grandfather took them in and told social services to Japan.
This was exactly what he was wanted. He and his little sister got all the proper paper work done with the help of their grandfather and boarded a plane heading to Japan.
Info: Perris is skilled in archery, he is not perfect but pretty darn close.
Digivice Appearance: The rim, strap, and the buttons of his D-arc are a simple black color while his acutally D-arc is a dark gray.
Digimon: Kotemon Gender: Female Personality: Kotemon is one of the most shyest digimon you will every meet. Even towards her tamer she is quiet and hardly talks. Although at times she can become quite talkative, but this only happens when Kotemon is sure no one else is around. She becomes really jealous if her tamer pass any attention to any other digimon, she says nothing to him, but she keeps it all in her mind. Fresh: Botamon Attribute: Data Special Ability: N/A Type: Slime Digimon Attacks: Bubble Blow:Fires bubbles from its mouth. In-Training: Koromon Attribute: Data Special Ability:N/A Type: Lesser Digimon Attacks: Bubble Blow:Fires bubbles from its mouth. Rookie: Kotemon Attribute: Data Special Ability: Fight/Warrior Type: Reptile Digimon Attacks: Hot Head: Headbutts the enemy with a flaming mask, or a flaming bamboo sword. Thunder Kote:Charges his fist with electrical current and punches the enemy. Champion: Dinohyumon Attribute: Data Special Ability: Fight/warrior Type: Dragon Man Digimon Appearance: (Picture would be nice.) Attacks: Lizard Dance: Attacks with a series of quick and powerful slices from the smaller swords. Akinakes:Attacks foes with a heavy swing from her largest sword Akinakes. Ultimate: Kyukimon Attribute: Virus Special Ability: Fight/Warrior Type: Bewitching Beast Digimon Attacks: Blade Twister:Spins into a twister and then slices its enemies at such speeds that the damage is not realized until after the attack Sanrensi:Three Consecutive Stars Death Sychte: Goes towards the opponet digimon and cross slashes with its sycthes. Mega: GuardiAngemon Attribute: Vaccine Special Ability: Fly/Warrior Type: Power Digimon Attacks: Holy Sword: Combines its two arm blades into a large sword of light which he uses to slice at its target at high speeds. Golden Ripper: Stands in a pose of a cross, then light gathers around him causing a cross to form. He then backs up and spins into the cross transforming the cross to a blast. It then aims at his enemy and blasts towards it Holy Embrace: She moves at a rapid speed contuinly slashing at the opponet. Final Destination: She focus her engergy allowing her whole body to glow, she then flys towards the opponet with the energy surronding her. _____________________________________ Optional: Biomerge: Slayerdramon Attribute: vaccine Special Ability:Fight/Warrior Type: Dragon Man digimon Attacks: Tenryuuzanha ("Sky Dragon Slay Off"): Speeds up by a rotation taijutsu, then vertically cuts its opponent into two from the top by its sword. Shouryuuzanha ("Rising Dragon Slay Wave"): Releases an upwarding dragon-wave from its sword and cuts off its opponent by the pressure. Kouryuuzanjin ( "Snapping Dragon Slay Blade"): At the closest suitable distance, wraps its opponent with its Fragarach and scrapes its entire body.
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Post by perris on Jul 30, 2009 10:52:34 GMT -5
Name: Fly Away x 2 Duration: 5 Posts Color: Gold Effect: The Digimon acquires the Special Ability "Fly". This will give the digimon the ability to fly. Digimon may gain wings when this card is used, but the transformation is different from digimon to digimon. This card has no effect on a digimon who is already has the ability to fly.
Name: Platinum Sword Duration: 4 Posts Color: Gold Effect: In order for this card to work, a digimon must have the Special Ability "Fight". A small broadsword is summoned into the digimon's hands, it's only about 3 feet or so in length, but it has a rather sharp edge.
Name: Speed Duration: 3 Posts Color: Gold Effect: A digimon who has been modified by this card will become twice as fast for the duration of this card's effect.
Name: Subzero Ice Breath Duration: 5 Posts Color: Gold Effect: The Digimon acquires the Special Ability "Ice". The digimon's breath becomes chillingly cold but is not lethal.
Name: Counter Attack Duration: 3 Posts Color: Gold Effect: When facing a digimon of a higher level the Offensive Power of a digimon modified by this card is raised by one level.
15.Name: Wizardmon's Spell Duration: 3 Posts Color: Gold Effect: Creates barrier around the digimon modified by this card which can easily withstand up to a Champion Level Attack. The radius of this barrier is variable. This barrier protects all those inside from all outside attacks, but also prevents those on the inside from attacking as well. If attacked by an Ultimate Level Attack, the shield is shattered but it defends that one attack. If attacked by a Mega Level or higher, the shield is not strong enough to defend.
41.Name: Info Chip Duration: 1 Post Color: Green Effect: If the type of a digimon modified by this card is Data, they will gain the power of an 'Ultimate' level digimon for the duration of the effect.
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Post by Kazai on Jul 30, 2009 10:58:54 GMT -5
There are a couple of things that need to be fixed with your profile. Firstly, it would be hard for him to just sneak into Japan and live there without citizenship, so that needs to be changed. Secondly, the descriptions for each of your attacks needs to be under the individual Digimon the attack belongs to. Thirdly, you've given a description about what your character wears, but have failed to mention anything about what he looks like.
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Post by perris on Jul 30, 2009 12:39:42 GMT -5
Okay, i think i fixed it now
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Post by Kazai on Jul 30, 2009 12:42:24 GMT -5
You have a coding error in your attack definition at the bottom of your first post... It would probably be better if you altogether deleted it.
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Post by perris on Jul 30, 2009 12:48:29 GMT -5
Deleted the coding area in the definition, and in the regualer attack, so its so bad xP
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Post by Kazai on Jul 30, 2009 12:56:17 GMT -5
Approved.
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