Guardian of Fire

[flamemon]

b]Digimon's Name:[/b] Flamemon

Gender: Male

Personality: Flamemon is a fiery and hot tempered digimon. He is energetic and athletic often running around everywhere. He tends to act without thinking. He also very stubborn, if his mind is set on something, almost nothing is going to make him change his mind. He has a strong sense of justice and tries his best to do what he believe is the right thing to do. Because of Flamemon’s Hot-headed personality, he gets into trouble and arguments often, but he has a natural leadership quality

History: He was born as a regular digimon, not destined to be the Guardian of Fire. Mokumon was a spirited digimon getting himself into trouble a lot. He made many friends. As DemiMeramon he got into more trouble but he made friends with a Shy Kokomon. She really looked up to him and his courage. But one day they were out playing and was attacked by a DarkTyrannomon. They were beat up pretty badly and the finishing blow was aimed for DemiMeramon but Kokomon stepped in to protect him. She finally confessed her true feelings and gave her energy to DemiMeramon. He was distraught at his loss but he finally had a goal, he wanted to protect the digimon and digital world. With Kokomon's power he digivolved into Flamemon and beat the DarkTyrannomon and absorbed his data.

From then on out he traveled the digital world and trained hard to become stronger and protect the digital world, he also wants to go find the Kokomon's digiegg or the Kokomon in any of her forms again.

Personal item: A black gem from Kokomon. It’s power is unknown.

Fresh: Mokumon
Attribute: None
Type: Smoke Digimon
Appearance:
Attacks: Smokey Blow (Smoke): Scatters smoke from throughout its body all over, escaping in the instant the opponent has lost sight.

In-Training: DemiMeramon
Attribute: Data
Type: Flame Digimon
Appearance:
Attacks: * Fireball: DemiMeramon shoots fire from their hands, burning their opponents.
* Body Burn: DemiMeramon shoot flames from their bodies.
* Hot Tackle: Tackles an opponent, burning them.

Rookie: Flamemon
Attribute: Variable
Type: wizard digimon
Appearance:
Attacks: * Monkey Ball (Baby Salamander): Tumbles forward, spinning with his limbs on fire, damaging anything it touches.
* Noble Heart: Covers his fist in fire and uppercuts.
* Flame Tail: His tail is engulfed in flames and swiped at his enemies

Champion: Agunimon
Attribute: Vaccine,
Type: Wizard digimon
Appearance:
Attacks: * Pyro Punch (Burning Salamander): Releases a flame dragon from his fists.
* Pyro Darts (Fire Darts): Throws small bits of fire at his target from his gauntlet.
* Pyro Tornado (Salamander Break): Uses a fiery tornado to spin himself around quickly, and then strikes the enemy with a roundhouse kick.

Ultimate: BurningGreymon
Attribute: Vaccine
Type: Evil dragon digimon
Appearance:
Attacks: * Pyro Barrage (Corona Blaster): BurningGreymon fires a solar heatwave laser from the "Rudori Tarpana" cannons on his arms.
* Wildfire Tsunami (Flame Storm): BurningGreymon surrounds himself in a fiery aura which he then releases in waves.
* Fire Below: This attack is only seen in Digimon Rumble Arena 2. This makes BurningGreymon jump into the air while flapping his wings, firing rapid small blasts from his Rudori Tarpana cannons. It does a lot of damage and up to 12 hits.

Mega: Aldamon
Attribute: Variable
Type: Wizard digimon
Appearance: images1.wikia.nocookie.net/digimon/images/4/4f/Aldamon_t.png
Attacks: # Solar Wind Destroyer (Bhrahma Shil): Gathers solar energy into a dense fireball which he hurls at the enemy.
Atomic Inferno (Bhrahma Sutra): Release thousands of rocketing fireball missiles from his expanded Rudri Tarpana

Mega (alternate): AncientGreymon
Attribute: Vaccine
Type: Ancient dragon Digimon
Appearance:
Attacks: * Omega Corona (Omega Burst): Releases a huge burst of flaming energy from his armor, causing an explosion over a few kilometres ahead.
* Gaia Tornado: Charges the aura of the earth to raise a great tornado.

[Henry]

To make images, you need to click the img tag button (underneath the crossed out S on the Add tags section of the post reply page) to insert the image tags (or you may type in the tags manually). Then you put the image url between the two tags. You can get the image url for an image by right clicking the image and clicking properties. Doing so should bring up a properties window which includes the image's url.

For example, heres the code for Demimeramon's image:

[IMG]http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/digimon/images/e/e3/DemiMeramon_b.jpg[/IMG]

Entered outside a code box, the code will appear as this:


As for your profile... You really need to fix the grammar and spelling errors. There's too many for me to even list. Use a spell checker for the spelling mistakes (also digimon with prefixes such as DemiMeramon and BlackTyrannimon are all spelled as one word), and read over the post for grammar mistakes. You are missing many commas, there are commas that should be periods, etc etc. commas mean a breath in one sentence, a period ends a sentence. Please fix it to the best of your ability, and we'll see if I can get more specific from there.

[flamemon]

Alright I finally figured out the picture thing, i spell checked it the best i could, and added correct punctuation the best I could. I also changed the history a little, not much.

[cerberumon]

He is a fiery and hot tempered like the spirit he was named after.

He is a fiery and hot tempered _______. When saying something is something, there needs to be something for him to be. You got adjectives (fiery and hot tempered) to describe what ever it is you are saying he is, but there needs to be an actual thing (noun) for him to be. Alternatively, you can remove the a so you are directly describing Flamemon as being fiery and hot tempered.

He is energetic and athletic, but tending to act without thinking and very stubborn.

"tending" should be "tends". "and very stubborn" should be a new sentence altogether. Put a period after thinking, and change the "and" to "He is also"

His hot-headed personality often leads to him arguing with others easily but a natural leader.

"easily" should be "often", and there should be a comma after that, and "he is" after "but"

I'll get to history later.

[flamemon]

Ok changed it, what do you think?

[Impmon]

Sorry for the confusion; removing the "a" in the first sentence was an alternative to the initial suggestion... right now, you'll need to put it back. Other than that, personality is good.

He was born as a regular digimon, he wasn't destined to be the Guardian of Fire, Mokumon was a spirited digimon getting himself into trouble he made many friends he was curious and brave digimon.

First of all, the first sentence should end after "Guardian of Fire", so that comma needs to be a period. The sentence would also make more sense if you changed "he wasn't" to "not".

A comma should be after "trouble", and you should put "and" after that, and end the sentence at "friends". The part about being curious and brave is probably not necessary, but if you feel it is, there needs to be an "a" after "he was"

As DemiMeramon he got into more trouble he made friends with a Shy Kokomon.

Should be an "and" after "more trouble"

But one day they were out playing and was attacked by a DarkTyrannomon, they were beat up pretty badly and the finishing blow was aimed for DemiMeramon but Kokomon stepped in to protect him,

The comma after DarkTyrannomon should be a period, and the t in "they" after that should be capitalized. The comma after protect him should be a period.

She finally confessed her true feelings and gave her energy to DemiMeramon,

The comma should be a period.

He was distraught as he finally had a goal, he wanted to protect the digimon and digital world and

... Right now this is saying he's upset because he finally had a goal. What I can suggest, is that you put a comma after "distraught", and change "as" to "but". There should be a period after digital world, and the "and" after that should be removed.

with Kokomon's power he digivolved into Flamemon and beat the DarkTyrannomon and absorbed his data.

The w in "with" should be capitalized.

[flamemon]

Ok I think i got all of that....what next?