Lulu heart net

[trainheartnet]

Name:Lulu heart net
Nickname:Black soul
Age:16
Ethnicity: Japanese
Height:6.4
Weight:135lb
Gender:Male
Alignment:Undecided
Birth Date:September, 10
Birth Place:Japan

Relatives:Mother- Ive heart net (37), Father- Ken chi (40) heart net

Personality: He always likes to do everything in perfect way without any mistake also he like when he meets someone to fight to say-i came to deliver bad luck-and sometime he likes to stay alone looking to the blue sky

Appearance: Lulu wear black shirt under a black coat and wear black pant and holding a gun hanging around his right leg also he has a brown hair and yellow eyes and putting number 13 on his chest

History: when he was born he was a good child also he was kind and lovely to everyone and he was close to his mother more than everything until he lost her .He felt sad but no one stand ed on his side to help him getting out of his sadness ,so that changed him a lot in everything. When he became 12 years old he started to act on his own and changed his life way.He became little open to a lot of stuff like making friends

Lulu started to fight for good people and defend them from the bad guys until he knew the card games that drew him to the Digimon games played with cards. He had no Idea how real the game could get

Info: He likes to have all pizza in the world ,and he likes to have a good friend who understand him also he likes cats

Digivice Appearance:

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Digimon: liollmon
Gender: Male
Personality: Courageous and power full he always likes to help his friend and be with him always and he likes fighting a lot

Fresh:papomon
Attribute: Vaccine
Special Ability: fly
Type:slime
Appearance:
Attacks: None

In-Training:firmon
Attribute:Vaccine
Special Ability: N/A
Type:lesser
Appearance:
Attacks:Tail Whip: Increases the centrifugal force in its long tail. This is so powerful that a clean hit will occasionally knock out even a Rookie Digimon

Rookie:Liollmon.
Attribute: Vaccine
Special Ability: Fight
Type:Exalted Beast
Appearance:
Attacks: Attacks:Leo Claw: Tears up the enemy with his sharp claws. Critical Bite: He bites at the weak spot of his enemy. This attack is able to bring down a Champion Level Digimon, though the rate is low

Champion:Liamon
Attribute:Vaccine
Special Ability: Fight
Type:Exalted Beast.
Appearance:
Attacks:Critical Strike: He bites at the weak spot of his enemy. Thunder of the Kings .Thunder of King: He charges the electricity on his mane for an attack

Ultimate:LoaderLiomon
Attribute: Vaccine
Special Ability: fight
Type: machine
Appearance:
Attacks: Boring Storm: Drilling attack produced by the super high speed rotation in his mane. Loader Morning Star: Uses the iron ball on his tail to attack

Mega:TigerVespamon
Attribute: Virus
Special Ability: fly, fight
Type:Cyborg Digimon
Appearance:
Attacks: Mach Stinger Victory: Stabs the opponent with his Royal Meister: in a twin-blade style. Royal Meister: Tears apart the opponent with it. Gear Stinger: Running fire of small needles

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[trainheartnet]

Decks




Name: Red Power Bean
Duration: 1 Post
Color: Red
Effect: Increases the power and strength of a Vaccine-type digimon's attack up one level. (f.e. Rookie Attack =>Champion Attack)

Name: Red Pepper
Duration: 5 Posts
Color: Gold
Effect: The Digimon acquires the Special Ability "Fire". This will raise the temperature of the modified digimon's body to the point where they are too hot to touch by a non-fire affinity digimon. This card has no effect on a digimon that already has the affinity fire.

Name: Fly Away
Duration: 5 Posts
Color: Gold
Effect: The Digimon acquires the Special Ability "Fly". This will give the digimon the ability to fly. Digimon may gain wings when this card is used, but the transformation is different from digimon to digimon. This card has no effect on a digimon who is already has the ability to fly.

[Impmon]

BanchoLeomon is locked. You will need to choose a different mega.

The title should be the name of the Tamer, not the digimon.

Please use proper sentence structure and refrain from excessive brackets.

[trainheartnet]

ok done ^_^

[Kaze]

You're almost done XD

It may seem small but, you still have some brackets that need to be removed

[Kazai]

You also have some bold coding errors.

[trainheartnet]

sorry it's the first time for me^^ i will try to fix it but
i need little help
^_^

[Kazai]

Alright... Still a bit of issues... First of all, for the simple parts of the profile, such as Name-Birth Place, you don't need periods at the end of the words. Secondly, your profile is still flooded with grammer mistakes. You need to correct those. Additionally, not all of your Digimon's special abilities are even existant. Lightning isn't a special ability. And it's supposed to be "Fly", not "Flying" as you have done numerous times. Same goes for Fight. It's "Fight," not "Fighting".

There is still a bit of work to do on this profile. Just keep trying. I'm sure you'll get it soon. @_@

[trainheartnet]

ok i did what you said hope i did good ^ ^

[trainheartnet]

please tell me if there is anything i can fix i want to join gaming fast ^^I'm too exited^_^